Rendezvous Comments

wonderful lyric poem, lovely to read.........10++++++++++

This is like a scene from a Hollywood movie! Great writing! 10! -Raj Nandy

Rendezvous indeed, described so perfectly, the passion of a returning warrior to his sweetheart, the longing and passion in their love making.. Beautiful Sathya you do romance well... Andrew 10

A beautiful strong setting u gave to the coming together of longing desires with full flow after a long wait....then what happens when they both meet? ...the page is on fire! Explicit piece of work!

wow! ! painted well.....beautiful

'Slowly they slipped on to the grass mattress For once; the time-wheel was left impasse' lovely rustic appeal--thanks for sharing lovely poetry ++++++++10 regards anjali

This is the dream of every soldier like expressed in novels like Trumpet Major by Thomas Hardy and the recent movie The Mask Of Zorro! Well expressed with the last lines about the bird is also fine! Keep it up!

The scene here is very well described.

it's like watching a painting!

Hello Sathya. Thans for sending me over here. Enjoyed this, you also have a very nice way with words and awesome imagination. Loyd

Lovely sentiments beautifully expressed.Would that homecoming were as you wrote it.