Saturday, October 7, 2006
Rendered Incompetent (A Tanka) Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I am exhausted
Thoughts no longer yield to me
Language disobeys
Ideas turn their back on me
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alice sunderland
16 October 2006
luv this one too! ! ! Ive no idea what a tanka is - but i seem to like them. al.
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R H
07 October 2006
Superb Asma! I can relate to the sentiment of this wonderful Tanka. Love the way you have personified thoughts, language and ideas. Justine
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7/19/2025 12:23:06 PM # 1.0.0
all said in little loved it! cheers! hema