Thursday, April 9, 2020

Renascence Declined Comments

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The valleys and the hills heaved and trembled,
The stone over my grave was rolled aside;
Like a freed bird, my spirit tried to soar -
Was this the Renascence as prophesied?
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 04 September 2020

(cont.) 2 - I love stanza 7 and " rude" in st.8! angel, God's lackey Last stanza is priceless, though SAD. : ( Great rhyming, Lora, as i've come to expect. to MyPoemList bri :)

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Bri Edwards 04 September 2020

1 - " renascence noun formal the revival of something that has been dormant. another term for Renaissance." line 4: i'm sure i've heard another word for this event I love stanza 2 & " I knew The sad answer, though I heard not a sound" (cont.)

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