Friday, February 19, 2016

Renaissance Comments

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Love - emerges from the depth of my heart,
fear will vanish with from my path.
Change, is the salt,
a new taste to my life!
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 March 2016

Tricks and trials in life. Thanks for sharing.

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Chuy Amante 22 February 2016

being born again as Yehushua called it a whole new life to be found and lived here while the other one fades, one never does

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Valsa George 19 February 2016

When love blossoms in the heart, there is no place for hate! Such a person is ready to accept the trials and sorrows of life with equanimity of mind. As he believes in rebirth, he has no fear to die! Great thoughts, Asim!

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Darren Jkoeryo 19 February 2016

Interesting poem with deep insight. Man

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T Rajan Evol 19 February 2016

All three very crucial aspects of life.....Master stroke, Asimji. Thanks for sharing.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 19 February 2016

Don't have hate for your enemy....a mark of being a true and wonderful person deep from heart....Beautiful poem....thank you for sharing :)

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M Asim Nehal 19 February 2016

Thanks Abhi.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 19 February 2016

A deeper meaning is found in every word you have told. if every person follows it the life in this world would be more beautiful than ever.

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M Asim Nehal 19 February 2016

Thanks much Uzefaji

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Souren Mondal 19 February 2016

In a world where hate has become so prevalent, it is perhaps worth it to die to be reborn in a world of love... Thanks for sharing Asim. A philosophical poem crafted with delicate details..

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M Asim Nehal 19 February 2016

Thank u so much.....

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Aarzoo Mehek 19 February 2016

Love, life and hate are interlinked emotions. Without love there is no life and hate plays the spoilsport. Lovely description of these emotions. After a hectic days work when you get to read beautiful poems, that's bliss. Thanks for sharing these beautiful emotions.10++++

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M Asim Nehal 20 February 2016

Thanks much Aarzooji.

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