Monday, March 3, 2008

Remove Her Necklace Comments

Rating: 4.3

City Park and a path of flowers at dusk,
The dream-inducing night;
I’m in love, I’m in love
With her Christmas heart
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Uriah Hamilton
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Goldy Locks 12 March 2008

Wanted more description. Doesn't satisfy the reader, sweetheart. Great opening, to a possible narrative - love, sjg xx

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Alex Watt 03 March 2008

'her christmas heart..a quater past midnight' it is the unexplained that i like about this poem

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