Saturday, July 25, 2015

Remote Control Comments

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Beauty said to herself,
I am aware of my charms,
I can feel myself,
But I have no arms,
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Khalida Bano Ali 26 July 2015

A very very thoughtful poem.......................10

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Valsa George 26 July 2015

When the dolls dance, we have to always think that the string is held by somebody else and all movements of the dolls depend on how he pulls the strings! This is true of human beings too! We move and act by the remote control held by some one above us! Enjoyed this highly philosophical write!

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Khalid Saifullah 25 July 2015

Life is beautiful but death shouldn't be forgotten, a great message..................10

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