Saturday, January 26, 2008

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Cozy lounge under the neon lights
A glass of red wine after a luscious dinner
Making your night a bright
Staying glued till midnight
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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a rich content! ! ! a great figurative poem... I got the messages... Simplicity shouldn’t be simple Difficulty shouldn’t be difficult--> deep verses

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Tiffanie Lau 24 March 2008

I love stanza two, and the last one! And i enjoy how you juxtapose the kind of power we all can yield over our lives, but the harsh reality that it doesn't really quite exist. very clever. kind of reminds me of the movie Click. thanks for sharing!

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