Wednesday, July 6, 2005

Remorse Comments

Rating: 3.8

Today I am up to the hilt
since early morning filled with guilt.
Still sleep-lagged wandered to the shower
at that ungodly twilight hour
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 06 July 2005

Lwrence, where are the references to your quote? When did I say that? I have always been a rhymer and find it exceedingly easy to do as well as enjoyable for others AND me. I often laugh my head off while 'composing', and then again when re-reading....... Thanks for your kind woirds H

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 06 July 2005

I remebered being told by 'someone' earlier how rhyming verse was not something they particularly appreciated! Perhaps 'AMNESIA' has set in because that 'someone' has, of late, created some wonderful rhyming verse that's great! I wonder 'who' that person could be...hmmm?

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Terry B 06 July 2005

Enjoyed the read, one that will put a smile on the face. Nicely done.

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