Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Remodeling Comments

Rating: 5.0

They met at a home remodeling show
At the Baltimore Convention Hall.
He was selling floor mops and
She demo’d picture hooks.
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Kate Richardson
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Will Barber 22 October 2008

A wonderful narrative. I truly enjoyed this. Very original.

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David Taylor 20 October 2008

Poems like these should be a grime, keeping me hanging until the last line. Nice one Kate. David

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 October 2008

a fine piece indeed.............10+

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Kesav Easwaran 16 October 2008

An artful write, Kate... a good example of imaginative poem writing...I very much liked the line ‘May be this could work'...why not a ten?

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