Tuesday, November 1, 2011

Remnant Of A Writer Comments

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A partial darkness eclipses my heart,
This interposed Opaque body,
of Crimson has become transparent,
Receding back within a dirty shadow,
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Crimson Love
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Stan Petrovich 03 November 2011

I can't get of a comment in which I mistakenly used 'obsequious, ' in lieu of obscure. If it keeps reappearing, ignore it. ''Did'st' is good.

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Jacqui Broad 02 November 2011

A partial darkness... Light is mightier than darkness, even if it's just a candle's light, blowing in the wind. There's always a rainbow after a storm, it's a promise... A rather beautiful, melancholic poem.

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Cosmic Dreamer 01 November 2011

Receding back within a dirty shadow... Wow! ... I love the imagery you have painted in my mind... Very nice poem...

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Eric Cockrell 01 November 2011

your soul calling you to the union of darkness and light that is wholeness... you can feel the power of your searching here!

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