Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Reminiscing Soul Comments

Rating: 2.6

Inside me sits a lonely soul
But inside her sits my heart
She’s gone that much I agree
She left a dying soul empty without words to beg
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Charles Farmkidzzz Mthembu
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Howard Kern 18 August 2009

very touching. All of us keep the memories close to the heart, and the sad fact is, the ones that hurt the most are the hardest to overcome, and remain the longest. nice work young man.10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 18 August 2009

A very touching poem that gives a sorrowful farewell message to the departed soul.

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Oh wow, it really is just beautiful! 'But now it rains no more in my eyes...' is pure genius! I love it! Thank you for inviting me!

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Charles Farmkidzzz Mthembu

Charles Farmkidzzz Mthembu

Durban South Africa
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