Torn between my Blackberry
And my little baby
Is already a tough call
But that is not all
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My hat is off to you madam for you have truly expressed the feelings of many working women in this world that not only work but have children too….even though you may feel tired and beaten up I am sure that you do feel gratified when things are going smoothly otherwise you wouldn’t be doing it…really enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing your thoughts with us…many blessings to you and your family. Scott
Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! wonderful poem with perfect artifice, cleverly presented theme with rightly placed chidings. Loved everything in it. CP
ASTOUNDING AND AUTHORITATIVE POEM ON WOMEN'S WOES! How many votes can I give to this masterpiece........I started liking more and more of ur poetry Sandra...................10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Dear Sandra, This is a beautiful depiction of a modern -day-mother torn amogst demands from baby, boss and husband simulteneusly and still running the show. your presentation is so vivid, I will like to call it ' a poetry on celuloid' like Gauder or Satyajit Ray or Roman Polinesky.These lines, in particular, I will lke to quote: 'my cup of woes/ often overflows/a sulking husband/a whinning baby/and to top it all / a very demanding boss' but Sandra'still so in the interest of propriety/ I try to do my bit for my family and society' This is where is your greatness.For that matter all working mothers.A great tribute to Mothers' Day. Keep on writing and keep in touch A-10-from me-Rajkumar
Sandra you give a vivid picture of the many-hatted jobs of a Mom - - and at times the frustration of trying to wear more than one at a time - - but a hat which must never be forgotten is the Sandra-hat..... wear it with pride girl... and make time to wear it... there will never be another YOU - and thanks for this well rhymed verse... God bless all Moms......10 and more from Fay....xx
a working mother is forever at emotional cross-roads...well penned, sandra!
nie tale milady.. i enjoyed in its completeness.
to sum it all..all roads goes back to the family.It is a matter of explaining and understanding..and your priority..I know in the end, love conquers all.. A lovely piece. I love it
You explained your feelings so well and I know how it is to be torn between husband, baby, boss. It all depends what hat you are wearing. It is exhausting and demanding, but the most important thing is to find 'Sandra' time when you can be you. Whether you have to beg, borrow or steal it you must do it somehow and if you think out of the square it will be your salvation. Thank you for your good wishes for Mother's Day and I love your imagery 'torn between my Blackberry and my little boy'. Well done! 10
If company has human right than human to have human rights and every boss should understand this...........A Great Write...............
Very few poem leave me speechless but this one surely does....torn between blackbery and my baby....i dont know this line strikes such a chord....for me i feel strongy that in a an attempt to earn a living we often lose touch with life... a marvellous write indeed happy mother days mommy Sandra :)
Brilliant write Sandra...and a very happy mothers day to you...Fi 10+++
The soft good humour inside apart, your poem tells how much a present day working woman has to adjust to the demands in her daily life...nice read...wish you a happy Mother's Day...10
Happy mothers day dear Sandra thanks for reminding me a lovely write ++10 anjali
LOVELY WRITE SANDRA...MOTHER'S ROLE SEEMS GOD'S ROLE OVER RULES EVERYTHING...THANKS YOU MADE ME THINK OF MY MOM
very nice poem...expressed clearly and with a touch of humor...good work...hope the hubby reads and gives you a break....