Saturday, March 30, 2019

Reminiscing A Day When..... Comments

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It was a day, full of all usual
but with some sort of difference
Day broke out, in a hazy mode
Sun, hesitantly peeped above skyline
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Edward Kofi Louis 10 April 2019

Quietness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 30 March 2019

Thank you Robert for the comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2019

Usual perspectives of love and life we see whole day. Some differences too we notice. Sun hesitantly pees on skyline and wonderful rays dance there. Austerity is performed by nature. Mighty ocean waves the beauty and love. Sweet cry carries bundle of love. A great imagery is drawn in this excellent poem. Thank you very much for sharing this with us...10

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Thank you Kumar, for your encouraging comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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