Sweet and bitter jungles
Like a rush
Of a mighty wind
Blown away to dry desert
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Thank you Frank for reading and commenting on this poem. I appreciate.
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ring noisily to crescendo.... reminds me of okigbo's short but millions of meanings works, great job
Thank you Jeanette Telusma for your comment on this poem. I'm glad you like it.
Reading this wonderful poem was interesting... it had a beautiful flow to it 10+++
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Desert, moon, and poetry- fascinating poem, thank you for sharing. Voted 10.
Thanks Oratile for your comment. I appreciate your reading this poem.