Thursday, January 3, 2008

Reminiscence Comments

Rating: 4.5

At dawn
When birds sing
Fluttering their wings
And dancing on tree tops
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Abubakar Ahmed Imam
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Yashim David George 27 February 2020

O how this muse have absorbed, still incite such deeds. The progression of thought is lucid. Thank you Imam.

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A A Umar Udubo 12 November 2015

And now As the pen dances To the melody Of the strings of my violin It is the memory of you. Dear Imam, The poem answers its name, truly; it never betrays its title, I daresay. I particularly got stuck to your last stanza. As my fingers search for the right keys while I type this, I have your last stanza in the mind.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 July 2008

Ahmed Last time I missed this poem. It is so beautifully expressed, simple and touching. Really I like to read it again. I give 10

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 09 June 2008

I like d it very much.last para is too good........

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Elenore Elizabeth 04 March 2008

wow this is truly stunning the violen, my favorite instrument. i loved how you wrote about it

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