Each road i cross
Each lovers i pass
Each person i talk
Each area i walk
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very deep..... if someone understand. No words i have to comment on! ! !
I don't know if I should say something, Actually I don't know what to say that have not been said...Not that I'm speechless...Thumbs way up baby...Great work...10+! ! !
I see you're very good at expressing your feelings. Another beautiful work from you.10!
u have brought out ur feelings in a good poetic form, ..... this poem has brought out my feelings too.
such a beautiful vivid poem though you have to change the U into a word itself in order to make it more lovely. Thanks!
you are so full of love...you see it manifested in every little thing in life.. nice poem
each line of ur poem reminds me how wnderfull poet ur, full of love poem
aha...........guesss you are in love..... like me my man always in my clock.ammm. each words you said declares you are really in love doing this poem and i can feel it...............lovely poem.....thanks a lot.hope the world will fall in love...annd no more wars and famines.rebels and crimes.thank you.
I agree with Eyan, its a bit too much with the each, in every line. But i like the piece, it was written with heart and that makes you a poet. Keep going
a very touching poem, well done.