Thursday, September 5, 2013

Reminder...Note To Self Comments

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Keep breathing...
even when the day dragged on like molasses...
even as every step taken was in quicksand...
even if the forecasted sunlight never appeared...
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Susan Lacovara
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Anthony Burkett 03 February 2014

Reminds me of a favorite pastime... remembering to exhale all the way to the surface...: -)

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Scott Twombley 22 October 2013

Just breathe...I think it really is that simple, and you captured that perfectly in this poem Susan. And thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on one of my poems. Be well, be free...Scott

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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