Thursday, November 10, 2005

Remembrance Of Fifties Comments

Rating: 5.0

At the end of the week, some drinking,
his best friend, and my mother waiting
by the top of the stairs with a basin.
We all learned our way around anger
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Louise Marie DelSanto
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Bill Smith 12 November 2005

loved that last verse, remined me of my own youth running home to watch Batman

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Ivy Christou 12 November 2005

I liked this a lot. It is very well written and each memory is described well enough for me to imagine it. Great flow too! HBH

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

Very wonderful and competent piece of verse!

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Cj Heck 10 November 2005

Well done, Louise. Strong images here make the people real. Warmest regards, CJ

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Simon Whild 10 November 2005

A very well written and hard-hitting poem full of very graphic images. I particularly liked the the fourth stanza. A very good poem with deftly drawn characters that come alive.

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