At the end of the week, some drinking,
his best friend, and my mother waiting
by the top of the stairs with a basin.
We all learned our way around anger
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I liked this a lot. It is very well written and each memory is described well enough for me to imagine it. Great flow too! HBH
Well done, Louise. Strong images here make the people real. Warmest regards, CJ
A very well written and hard-hitting poem full of very graphic images. I particularly liked the the fourth stanza. A very good poem with deftly drawn characters that come alive.
loved that last verse, remined me of my own youth running home to watch Batman