Saturday, October 29, 2016

Remembrance Comments

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Though her coat maybe old and worn,
and the years have turned it gray. Underneath
the embers still burn.Lay and flicker against winds
that bicker. Their howling can wear, and at times
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Rebecca Navarre
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Susan Williams 30 October 2016

You have a way with words, Rebecca. You use them in places and ways that burn themselves into our minds where they recall memories from forgotten corners and gives them new life... such as your choice of the word bicker- -it is so perfectly right for some winds! ! ! ! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - the embers still burn.Lay and flicker against winds that bicker. 10+++++++++++++++++++++ you word Rembrandt you! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 30 October 2016

Goodness! Thank You Susan, I SOOOOO... LOVE Your Poetry! ! ! ! ! ! As I Think You Might Of Caught That In My Replies To Them, , hehe All My Heart! ! ! God Bess! ! !

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