Remembrance Comments

Again a poem bordering on something which is too straightforward in it's approach.

When you have withdrawn your self and the magic, when only the smell of your love lingers between my, then, only then, can I greedily consume your presence. superb poem great expression great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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thanks for this poem

How I would love to hear Maya Angelo reading her poems. The auto computer voice is not good.. All is not lost though, her voice was so distinctive one can summon up her sound and imagine she reads it to you personally!

Love making always needs the presence of souls

I did not understand

Again! Wow. This is just wonderful. We should have more poems like this or better!

............beautiful and inspiring, nicely penned ★

Awesome I like this poem, check mine out 

Yes, some of us relate to similar memories.

The poem plays upon multiple meanings, the line your taking reaches consummation in the magic withdrawn and seed spent an afterglow of ecstasy savoured consumed

yea it is...remembering the special moment...you're right keith....

This poem places images of a woman enjoying love making with her lover I think they are having foreplay… then they do the “deed” “When you have withdrawn Yourself and your magic…” After the “deed “is done and his fragrance or scent is left on her Then she will miss him and think about that special moment they shared or him (the memory of him) That’s what I think, what do you guys think?

wonderful.................................