Remembrance Comments

If you break faith with us who die we shall not sleep though poppies grow in Flanders fields........thoughtful write.....John

10 out of 10..........least we forget

My heart is heavy with sadness, i could cry. We have to do something to make this world a beautiful place to live in. Your poem clearly depicts cruelty of some people, and it should be the opposite, Kindness! .How i am touched by this.you are very talented, and for this, i salute you! Your poems are simple, and i love the way you present it..You deserve a warm applause!

the moment i started to understand what you went through tears ran down my cheak. u are very talented i would love to read more! ! love amanda

Sounds very personal and almost beyond comment but it needs telling and you have done it very well. I like your work. All the best David