Saturday, October 17, 2015

Remembrance Comments

Rating: 4.5

Remember the day
We confessed albeit too late
You afar through a network and I lay
In bed talking to a roommate
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A A Umar Udubo
COMMENTS
Malika farouk 23 July 2018

very nice work Aliyu.thanks for sharing

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 April 2018

Write comment. A good start, Aliyu. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 12 December 2015

Another good one, here! ! !

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Bakuli Bhakali 16 November 2015

Breath-taking! and for sure i'm not exaggerating! thanks for sharing...

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Cathy Smith 12 November 2015

wonderful command of language. my favorite poetry tells a good story, and you do just that. i think you mean broad daylight not brought daylight perhaps. fyi...i enjoy your words.

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A A Umar Udubo 12 November 2015

Thanks a lot. Yes, of course, broad daylight it's my bad. Thanks for the Correction.

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A A Umar Udubo 12 November 2015

Sir Dike, I feel honoured, truly. Thank you for stopping by. And sure I will.

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A A Umar Udubo 12 November 2015

Sir Dike, I am honoured, truly. I thank for for stopping by. And sure, I will.

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Chinedu Dike 11 November 2015

Romantic love story, well articulated and subtly penned in poetic diction with good rhyme scheme. Lovely piece of poetry nicely written from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Aliyyu. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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A A Umar Udubo 12 November 2015

Sir Dike, I feel honoured, truly. Thank you for your insightful comment. And sure I will.

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