Remembering What You Gave Me Comments

Spectacular poem. I felt the power, loneliness and crashing of the waves againt the disappointing, disappearing shoals our life and loves. Beautiful!

Love this one, so well written, so clever, thanks,

Simon, how can I not feel this poem so engraved with the most powerful emotions, I see you becoming everything you describe letting go and being complete with it, desires run strong and at these moments creation becomes passion and the Universe. Very Beautiful Simon, you are such a powerful writer. Superb.

beautiful... the haunting touch of a love deeply ingrained...

Beautiful poem, full of meaning and great imagery.

hello.... i found this most interesting... it actually felt like three movements of waves, a crest, the fall then the larger crest...i hope you get what on earth im on about...The threatening gulls i think i understand the symbolism there... and i think the finest visuals are tears and waves combined...tyvm karen