Remembering The Good Old Days Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Remembering The Good Old Days

Rating: 5.0


I remember
The good old days
Children playing in the park
Them dancing singing such joy

I remember days into nights
Playing hide and seek and baseball
Daredevil roller skate hockey
And my first crush on that cute blonde

I remember
Unauthorized
High school newspaper
My being censored
And so highly praised

I remember
All those years
All those great friends
The memories

The good old days
Clear as light
Never tainted
With bitterness

Thursday, June 9, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Therapist by M.J. Lemon. Sincerest thanks, my good friend!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 June 2022

A special porm...loved it

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Richard Wlodarski 11 June 2022

Sincerest thanks, Geeta for adding my poem to your favourites!

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Critic 11 June 2022

The title of the poem brings our imagination alive. Alive to our earlier days. Your poem successfully brings your memories dancing into existence.

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Richard Wlodarski 11 June 2022

Sincerest Thanks for your critique!

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Critic 11 June 2022

Very few of them know how to analyse poetry. Swain always has a short sentence.

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Richard Wlodarski 11 June 2022

They are poets, not analysts. Short is better than no response.

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Critic 11 June 2022

On this pathetic site, there are about six poets who comment. Same old same old.

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Richard Wlodarski 11 June 2022

And they are excellent with their comments!

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Sandra Feldman 11 June 2022

How very, very nice, Those good old days, Your lovely poem, Makes us realize, How happy and lucky are They, That have those days to remember. Excellent poem, just flows into the heart. Thank you!

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Richard Wlodarski 11 June 2022

Sandra, I'm very happy with your very positive response. Especially, 'just flows into the heart'. Thanks so very much!

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