Thursday, February 16, 2012

Remembering Childhood Comments

Rating: 3.5

The setting sun in the winter skies
Reflected dimly in the old man's eyes.
On a patio porch in a plastic chair
Close beside him his dog lay there.
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Willie Walker
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Wahab Abdul 01 March 2012

A good thought expressed in a good free verse, a great write.

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Unwritten Soul 21 February 2012

Oh such a sweet travel to do in any time, to fly with innocent feeling again it makes us feel wonderful...transport self into past time memories of great time, great stories, great smile even in bad days..it will roll in a history of life that always eternal in mind..such a great poem...because when we open what we have now, everything was changed and world really different..you left me smiling to travel your childhood with you_Unwritten Soul

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Dave Walker 16 February 2012

A great poem, like it, a great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, In The Eyes Of Bluesman Jack.

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