Remembering Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Remembering

Rating: 5.0


My thoughts got carried away,
I remembered sunshine and dewdrops,
Of those long lost days once again.
And all back then was fine,
I remember looking from the hill,
Onto the old coal mine,
With the mountain behind.
That was our village scene,
The days of coal in a valley so green.
When summers were long,
The hot sun shone,
Onto my special place.
They were the best times,
Never to be replaced.


Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 11 February 2023

Beautiful reminiscence. A delightful picture of the cherished memories.

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Jayne Louise Davies 12 February 2023

Thank you Nosheen x I'm greatful for your comments x

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Sandra Feldman 10 February 2023

So many of us pine for happy times long gone, but your poetry paints those hurting yet beautiful portraits best1

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Jayne Louise Davies 12 February 2023

Thank you Sandra x I appreciate your comments x

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