Friday, August 29, 2008

Remembering Comments

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Remonstrating against all memories and desires
Is the modern way; arrogant freedom beckons unless the body,
Unappeased by what should be done wants to follow another way
The body has its own burning hunger and it is not what all imagine
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Chitra - 02 September 2008

pearls of wisdom culled from your inner mines with them each soul rhymes

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Ency Bearis 29 August 2008

sad to say to think about it, losing identity/unable to recognize you/confusion amnesia/dementia..such a deep thought to reckon...nice concept...well written.... Ency Bearis

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Kris Smith 29 August 2008

A very poignant poem here, a lot to think about, to lose ones identity is to lose ones soul. The road we take as individualsis never straight and narrow, enjoyed this food for thought write 10 Chris

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Kesav Easwaran 29 August 2008

yes...losing one’s identity is a disease in itself...walks and words are the limbs affected here...a ‘three direction run’ by one single soul the body the brain and the mind way...a compromise if achieved, so far so good...a good insightful poem, Rani...congrats 10/10

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