Friday, August 19, 2011

Remember Us 3 Comments

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As the sun rises among us,
I realize as the day passes it will turn from dawn to dust.
There's no need for hatred and pain,
For only you can see whats to gain.
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Aqeb Benazir 20 August 2011

the second stanza is really true and it's very well written. good work! This would make a great song!

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