Remember That When I Fondle Your Breasts Comments

I loved this - intensity pervades your poems. Aphrodite always demands a sacrifice, and is a jealous goddess, scourging those who turn from her altar, not paying proper reverence. This poem conveys that perfectly, with insight and great beauty.

I still love this poem, even after the changes you made, Uriah. It is sensual without being offensive...and the longing is palatable. I love the line, 'I'm going to dive into your soul and swim.' This does have mythological proportions and promise of grandeur. Raynette

Uriah, This is wonderful. The sensuality and eroticism and the passion of romance fills it with intrigue and wonder. Your offering to Aphrodite was indeed rewarded with this most sensual and delectable poem. Warm regards, Hugh

I love the thought of diving into the soul and swimming around! This entire poem was wonderful Uriah. Sincerely, mary

'I’ve made offerings to Aphrodite, ..' That's how you got this poem. It's fantastic.

This is so sensual and passionate and so well written.Another gem from another brilliant poet.Keep um coming.love Duncan P.s I was listening to Hayley Westenra's Wuthering Heights when I was reading this and the two married beautifully together.

Uriah, This is wonderfully sensual and spicy. You have painted some tantalizing pictures with your words. Great imagery, great passion! Take Care- TGR (Theresa)

I love this one Uriah. Very passionate and irresistible as Lori has said.

I love this, Uriah! It has such fire and passion (naturally irresistible to women) , and a great ending as well. Nice!