Friday, May 31, 2019

Remember That Time Comments

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Remember that time...
When I teared, and you tried
To fool around to make me smile
Do you remember? Do you?
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Unwritten Soul
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Sekharan Pookkat 04 July 2019

A golden grassy park carved the names on trees smiling against the visitors found thy name could it be cheerful for you to remember those days and moments! ! ! ! ! !

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Hans Vr 23 June 2019

Our Creator has given us the amazing power to remember all love and kindness. He has filled our hearts with love and each memory will encourage us to pour some of it on the people around us, creating more memories, more love and more kindness. We are in the middle of a chain reaction :) . Wonderful poem from a wonderful soul.

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Mj Lemon 01 June 2019

The closest ties are so bittersweet. This amazing verse captures this reality so very perfectly. Amazing, Soul!

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Crying Shame 31 May 2019

Tis not a text message uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2019

Haha, surely i have to thank u for reminding me. It was my mistake to write a poem using phone... I do it very brief and didnt check before i submit. Shame on me.. Thank you :) have a nice day ahead

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Kelly Kurt 31 May 2019

Don't use u ever in a poem. It's not a text message.

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2019

Thank you dear Kelly for your comment, you were right.. Its should be forbidden to use in this writing. Actually i construct this poem on phone and i forgot to change some.. Thank you for your constructive comment, i do appreciate it. Ill change it. Hope things are fine there

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Lyn Paul 31 May 2019

You have written of something that keeps our mind and our heart strong. That beautiful connection of friendship and kindness that lifts us all. It makes the world a wonderful place and the world needs so much more. Thank you Soul.

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2019

Dont thank me, thank you....bcoz you always come visit me here though we been in touch sometimes... And not in other time but we know our friendship never broken... I always wish n want you get the best...with all of my other friends... No exception.. Be happy always

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Muhammad Ali 31 May 2019

Thanks for these words. Humanity, that you will always play. Soft emotions of friendship, and thanks for the blessings you in a beautiful poem You do a difficult job, that is, you own friendship.. Means you own. Best wishes friend

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2019

Thank u dear, thank you for being my friends all these years, i really appreciate your friendship and this will be ours forever. Take care always there...

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