Remember My Existence Comments

Very eloquent. We all want our existence to be remembered. May your poems live beyond the calendar. Kind wishes, Sandra

nice two similes and anaphora in the same time: ''Remember my existence as a helpless man, I worship you as an ideal woman.'' of this lyric poem..10+

Sir, a heart wrenching poem,10+

Interesting good write 10

wowwwwww lovely words dear Sanjib-- truely lovely see when in love how nice words emanate it comes straight from the heart-- but still--one has to be realistic in life one cannot just fall in love with any one just for a song. One has to be practical in life Hope this person whom you are in love will be a great source of inspiration for you and make you one of the greatest poets here whatever--I welcome you here to poemhunter and for this lovely poem a straight tenner from meeeeeeeeee anjali