Thursday, March 17, 2005

Remember, Grandpa? ! Comments

Rating: 4.1

Ahhhhhhh, the sound of bliss and comfort
escapes my worn and pale-blanched lips,
first having passed those miracles of craft,
such handsome specimens, so lovingly created
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Sandra Osborne 18 March 2005

I loved the ZZZZ's too. You are a poet, and the Trolls know it.

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 17 March 2005

Very well written.Liked the 'zzzzzz' stop inbetween and 'eighteen pairs of eyes'.Flow was good.Thank you.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 17 March 2005

Male pattern baldness a problem? Yes sir, it can be disconcerting. I remember the days when they asked me for my ID, for Baldur's sake! H

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