Monday, May 9, 2011

Remember Dear Child... I Am Always Near Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m writing these words while I still know I can, while loving memories still process through my mind; I need you to keep this letter, just to simply remind.
To remind you, that forgetting is nothing but a phase, for temporary loss of thoughts is nothing but a maze.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 May 2011

I like it. You have described it very well. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. Great write. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Taunya Benns

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