Tuesday, November 1, 2005

Remember Bali Comments

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Remember Bali-
of you and me
and the fields of paddy
in Ubud's glory?
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Ave Lilik
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Poetry Hound 01 November 2005

I've been to Ubud and to the Borders Bookstore in Friendship Heights. I wish your poem had conveyed more of the specialness of Bali or what happened to you there. Regards.

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