Monday, June 1, 2020

Remember A Kiss Comments

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Always remember this
Before ever giving or receiving a kiss,
Don't be a Doubting Thomas
A kiss is more than just a promise.
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Randy McClave
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Lisa Andress 01 June 2020

I love this poem however the word choice quieten for me at least change the flow and disrupts it maybe that is what you are going for. it for me would flow better with " That can quiet any ocean, or That can quieten down any ocean, " just a thought thanks for sharing

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Kim Barney 01 June 2020

I like that last line. It reminds me of something I read in the Bible.

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