On a cool night
a full moon
inspects toddler's toys
strewn across the yard
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On a cool night / a full moon / inspects toddler's toys / strewn across the yard- - - -> this so gorgeous! ! ! ! so visual! ! ! ! it is what well-written Literature is all about! ! ! ! The rest of the lines follow this visual treasure of a poem 10+++++++++++++++ and onto my fav
Even small scenes and natural occurrences of no great significance can leave a lot of impressions when the mind is calm and composed. The same scenes might not impress us or even seem repulsive if the mind is perturbed. So everything depends on our mental mood. Beautiful poem....! 10 on 10
Thank you so very much, Valsa. Yes, I am always amazed by how great an impact small things can have, and how long lasting those memories are.
And thats how memories remind us, just like a smoke of past revisit air..thick, thin and disappear...it may gone but cold or warm lingers!
Hi M.J. Lemon. Blessings are the moments a man remembers and breathing in peaceful memories. nice poem dear friend.
Thank you, my friend. And indeed those peaceful memories are the foundation of blessing.
Reminds me of the peace I always experience when I'm up in Northern Ontario. M.J., thanks for this peaceful memorable work of art.
Thank you, Richard. So good to hear I am able to transport you back to stunning Northern Ontario.
the imagery takes me to a place that every soldier or someone fighting for justice and peace is searching for
I can feel the calmness reading your poem, I get that same feeling sitting in my garden at dusk when all is quiet and when even the gulls have flown to their nest.
Thank you, David. And you describe a perfect time of early evening.