Wednesday, September 9, 2015

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Rating: 3.5

A smile for the love you still bring
Tears for the pain that lingers
A sigh for the memories that sing
A glimpse of your face in the embers
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Jorelyn Leonard
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Pamela Sinicrope 15 September 2015

This is a very sad poem! You did a great job through your use of imagery to show us your pain. It's a nice poem and I'm so very sorry!

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Jo Leo 15 September 2015

I'm glad it has reached you in this way as I wrote this for my younger brother who has passed. I am sorry that it has made you sad though but thank you for reading.

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Bernard Snyder 09 September 2015

Short but sweet! Thanks for sharing such a 'gem'!

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Jo Leo 15 September 2015

Thank you

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