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I remember when
my head used to spin
spinning like a top
now an abrupt stop
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Aqua Flower
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Kostas Lagos 09 July 2019

Loss can be a great source of inspiration... You surely managed this one really well

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Aqua Flower 16 July 2019

It depends on what you lost. Change is not always easy and life does not like void and will always look to fill it. Thank you for reading this and your comment. :)

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C F 07 July 2019

I can see you sitting by a darkened window, dry tears on your face, staring at the night sky, listening to the silence in the air – these are the images invited by your poetry. Very touching poetry.10+

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Aqua Flower 08 July 2019

In life, we have to make decisions. Some of these decisions are not easy. But some of them have to be made in order to survive. Life to me is a give-and-take some things we have to let go and some things we get to embrace...it is, to me, all about priorities. Yes that is exactly how the poem should read. Thank you for your comment.

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