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Without ears that listen
I wont waste my words to speak
As if too much water on plants
Flood will kill them only
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Beauty will be missed when its gone. Very well said. Too much of water can kill the plants. Care should be there only upto needed and not a drop beyond that. One of the facts maybe we learn later. This break us apart from inside. I loved each worthy lines that is part of our life. Thought provoking write.
Beautiful message conveyed through equally exquisite images.Thanks for sharing☺
It's a very fine image about care, theover-watering. Yes, I really like this poem. It has to go in my favourites
Oh, I am happy knowing you like it....dont eat too much too...when there is hunger food be more delicious hahahahaha joking! Thanks dear for visit
Very profound. I have found that when one overwhelms ears that do not hear with too many words, with words that pour out like floods, the effect is like drowning a parched plant with far too much water. A great poem..
Thank you for your kindness, im glad you understand it very well and clear :) sometimes it is my fear to think people may not understand my work so i cant deliver the right message..Thanks dear
Beautiful.... and wise. You handled the combination of love and beauty and wisdom with a very deft pen- each part did not subtract from another part, all blended together with poetic ease. Well done! ! ! 10
Thanks dear, oh i replied your message...i cant do much but a bouquet of prayers and hope for all of you there...Always be positive and you are sunshine over the clouds
..but i always ready to offer Like a well that always full readiness to offer is heavenly. it is a greater character. givine is more precious than receiving. tony
water, pouring down to earth from the womb of clouds are as precious as words coming from a gifted heart
To form a geneous clouds, need a strength and patience And all natural occurences, they occur with reasons To the land it marks the prescence To hearts it ask for understand Thanks dear green rose :)
so you are a gift of nature for the one.. a breathing gift. and to cure... so, now it is lucky and worthy to love and accept the presence of blessings, otherwise it will be a remedy but days never come again. really expensive. beautiful poem i found when I could link the poem with the title.
Thanks dear..Not only me, you and other as well...advice is so meaningful and care is a great thing to offer as well for someone when they really wanted it, it can be remedy to cure broken soul..but if we over giving it, they never understand how care we are, and never well appreciated..Ive learned from my experiences as a living soul to be kind to others..and because of this also i now understand one of our proverbs...be moderate doing good things, never do bad thing...However never stop doing good things my dear, just need to know when we should give. :)
Wonderful poem, it's all to easy for people to misunderstand other people's emotions.
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7/19/2025 4:14:33 PM # 1.0.0
A thought provoking write. Going through this poem I memorize a proverb 'Too much of any thing is good for nothing.' Too much of water spoils the plants like the flood does. Hence proper care should be taken. A drop of water is most important. Further much care sometimes creates fear that one can't enjoy beauty. Beauty will only be missed when its gone. We should take care of how much things we giving, till enough of hands to handle. Dear Soul, you have painted this poem astutely and hauntingly. I like most lines are... Because my care for you is expensive As if it is water in desert ...but i always ready to offer Like a well that always full Many thanks for posting this gem.