Remains (Or Forgotten Dreams) Comments

The third stanza of this poem is remarkable. It's as if you pulled a veil from what is usually hidden from our direct gaze that revealed beneath it the mechanism of our minds. The heart is that component of our being which put the veil there because it wants to protect our feelings. And your impulse to pull it aside shows boldness, no, courage. I don't know what will happen next. This is a plateau of vision. Are there higher plateaus to ascend? Or is the surrounding psychic landscape all lowlands? An amazing poem, inside me now.

Very nice reading........of dreams......some erased, some etched, a mystery no doubt.....Nika.......I love this piece so much..........thank you for sharing......please read my poems at your leisure...........