Monday, June 12, 2017

Remains Comments

Rating: 4.6

when all that remains:
clouds;
the day-washed sky;
the royal sea,
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GORDON GILHULY
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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 June 2017

Fantastic imagery has inked this awesome poem. Congrts for the same as also on poem of the Day.

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Gordon Gilhuly 26 June 2017

Thank you, Ratnakar.

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Kinyua Karanja 25 June 2017

Awesome poem, well written I like it.

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Thank you, Kinyua.

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Rini Shibu 25 June 2017

Lonely poem..Congratulations Once upon a time innocence knew but we have killed it..I like this line

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Thanks, Rini.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 June 2017

Such an interesting poem.. congrats on being chosen.. Rated 10+++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, BATHE YOUR HEART, and BECAUSE I LOVE HER. Thanks, Gordon👍

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Thank you, Bernard.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 June 2017

The absence of all that is innocent and beautiful. Your poem is profound. Full of vivid imagery. Very philosophical. Sad and tragic. Yet inspiring. It has inspired me to write a new poem called Absence. Thank you for the inspiration.

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Richard, you are very kind. Thank you & good luck with your new poem. I look forward to reading it.

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Rae Seagull 25 June 2017

Very thought provoking. Congratulations

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Thank you, Rae.

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Judy Cruz 25 June 2017

I really liked your poem. Congratulations on poem of the day.

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Thank you, Judy.

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Francie Lynch 25 June 2017

Great storm of words.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 June 2017

Thanks for the beautiful poem. Congratulations on poem of the day

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Thank you, Subhas, for your kind words.

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Savita Tyagi 25 June 2017

The poem effects with changing emotions, but a deep connectivity is displayed throughout!

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Thank you, Savita.

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 June 2017

Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Thank you, Anil.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 June 2017

Once upon a time! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Allport 25 June 2017

a wonderful thought provoking poem? yet to a lot of people absence makes the heart grow fonder! .............. superbly written

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Thanks, Tom.

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Gary Gowns 25 June 2017

I like this poem. Congratulations on poem of the day.

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Thank you, Gary.

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