when all that remains:
clouds;
the day-washed sky;
the royal sea,
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Lonely poem..Congratulations Once upon a time innocence knew but we have killed it..I like this line
Such an interesting poem.. congrats on being chosen.. Rated 10+++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, BATHE YOUR HEART, and BECAUSE I LOVE HER. Thanks, Gordon👍
The absence of all that is innocent and beautiful. Your poem is profound. Full of vivid imagery. Very philosophical. Sad and tragic. Yet inspiring. It has inspired me to write a new poem called Absence. Thank you for the inspiration.
Richard, you are very kind. Thank you & good luck with your new poem. I look forward to reading it.
Thanks for the beautiful poem. Congratulations on poem of the day
The poem effects with changing emotions, but a deep connectivity is displayed throughout!
a wonderful thought provoking poem? yet to a lot of people absence makes the heart grow fonder! .............. superbly written
Fantastic imagery has inked this awesome poem. Congrts for the same as also on poem of the Day.
Thank you, Ratnakar.