Friday, April 18, 2008

Remainders Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ahead of me on the sidewalk strolls
a young couple, arm in arm,
sharing a secret thought,
oblivious to the swirling mass of humanity
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Jon Ojala
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C.R. Clark 18 April 2008

Very warm and tender poem. Somewhat sad but excellently written. A great read, thank you......10... Richard

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Rani Turton 18 April 2008

The lines are touching and the nostalgia omnipresent. The reason why she went away is unknown and remains a constant query. Good poem.

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