Reluctant Hero Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Reluctant Hero

Rating: 5.0

He didn't want to go to Vietnam,
but went because his country made the call.
He never could say no to Uncle Sam,
because he loved his country, after all.

His father died in France in World War Two,
and he thought maybe that would be his fate.
He loved that banner red and white and blue,
so when they asked, he didn't hesitate.

When he came back, it was to taunts and jeers,
and long-haired hippies spat into his face.
He'd always thought that he'd return to cheers;
instead, some people viewed him in disgrace.

He didn't want to go, but it seemed right,
and now his future's anything but bright.

Reluctant Hero
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem took third place in the 2025 Mississippi Poetry Society spring contest. It is published in the Mississippi Poetry Journal 2025 Contest Edition on page 132.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 07 July 2025

Congratulations Kim Barney for your poem getting third place in the competition. This poem has been written from a humanist point of view.The soldier did not want to to go to war, because in his heart he did not approve it.But he had to obey the order, because he loved his country.(Part-1)

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Tom Allport 16 July 2025

Sk sad when we follow the flag thinking it right...

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M.J. Lemon 16 July 2025

Such a powerful verse, Magnificent, Kim. And congratulations on the finish at the spring contest.

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Jayne Louise Davies 08 July 2025

Thanks for sharing Kim! A big welcome back : ) I thought I'd been banned from the site! lol x Tried for months to get back on! Where's Bri and Cowboy Ron? And I'm also missing LeeAnne. Lovely to see you're back on x

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 July 2025

Great to see you again, Kim! Welcome back.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 July 2025

Wow, congratulations, Kim! A great poem that depicts the love of one's country. So well crafted and cleverly executed. You got tons of awards, Kim! So proud of you!

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