Friday, June 12, 2009

Reluctance! ! ! Comments

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My hands shiver to pen,
With the fear they may go awry
Tongue tightens its sound,
Lest it may lash out harsh words.
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Queeny Gona
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Allotey Abossey 12 June 2015

I love the style, the flair, the thought and the flow. It's beautiful. Honestly, it's a very attractive poem. Reluctancy sometimes is a resistance of the spirit and a spiritual salvation at other times its a deprivation of what could be a great achievement. God bless for this beautiful poem my dear

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Preetam Shetty 07 June 2010

As Sid says you could have elaborated a bit more.....you can still try

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Siddharth Singh 22 July 2009

A reluctant body language for a reason unknown. Quite good.

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premji premji 08 July 2009

true to the core.........................

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