*religious Fission... Comments

Indeed fellow Earthling- your profundity is Humanly well expressed I totally agree with the related contemporary WMD 'Fission' of; War, religion and political controversies You write; 'In the name of god, they started a religious fission, And the essence of oneness vanished with seasons.... ' god is not he god is not she God is We - Buddhism Thank you for your Wisdom sharing. ...louie

nice effort...well woven...quite impressive...

you ve used very effective words indeed which can speak to the core of the reader's mind....thanks for the words of wisdom10++

In atomic explosion fission and fusion both are chain process, one related to the other. So is the religious fission and fusion. But your poem is true in spirit and sense......10/10

I liked the title of this poem, it is very apt! More blood has been lost in this world due to religious fission - than all the World Wars put together! When core of the atom is split lot of evil and negative energy is released! We require' fusion'! Like in music we have excellent jazz fusion! GOD IS ONE, - let us all blend together for the cause of Humanity! I have written on these aspects already! Thanks! 10! -Raj Nandy

and with with fission came a lot of hate with passion to trade and barter our souls to the devil come lets forget this fission and live as brothers and sisters in love then this early mission will surely become a true vision as the Lord God above had truly intended wonderful write vaibhav -10 anjali

great thoughts evolve here.. you shared with us a great piece.. very wholesome... touches one's inner thoughts... ...thought's provoking write.. 10++++

thought provoking...but anice job you have here, son Hugs, Mom

GREAT COINCIDENCE COINED BETWEEN ATOMIC AND RELIGIOUS FISSION

a fusion of powerful profound thoughts..churned out from your sensitive mind thought provoking!

Perceptave and relevent in todays chaotic evolution of spiritual and social changes.

religious unity is in everyone, because their is only one GOD, no matter what name we may give him.

Yeah how true........we are seperated so much with fanatic faiths leading to chaos...beautifully written

Not withstanding the fission, I do see a fusion among the real seekers of God!

Vaibhav, Very philosophical and theological and proufound. A wonderful insight for one so young. My utmost compliments. Ms Susan

yet world would vanish again by another big bang! ! ! ! , really humanistic idea, well penned,10+, thanks forsharing

Dear Vaibhav, It's a really thought provoking poem coming from a very young man. The religion whose main object was perhaps to unify people and keep them bonded together in peace has lost it's object in the hands of the preachers.. So, last four lines of your poem says it all. beautiful idea, relevant for the day, nice rhyme selective minimal words -all calls for A-10- for you Vaibhav.-Rajkumar

Amazing flow and subject.10

Peace is so precious such a lovely piece indeed and thank you for the love in your heart you spread so lovingly 10++

very true indeed..... wonderful poem, friend. the last two lines take the poem to a different level.....