Religion Poem by Shaun Cronick

Religion

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Yes it helps,
It gets me through.
Religion can maybe,
Do that to you.

In my life,
I live and lead.
I heed its message...
Help those in need.

Tuesday, November 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual,caring,charity,good,helpless,messages,poverty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 13 November 2019

line 7: use " its" not " it's" . not a rare mistake. i AM needy. do you have any spare money i can have? ? bri :)

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Shaun Cronick 14 November 2019

You are absolutely correct sir. thank you for pointing that out I would never have seen it. And now corrected. And I do have some spare money lying about it's in my car, Just a couple of bob in the loose change from buying petrol. It's all yours Bri. But even a king's ransom would not be enough to buy just one of your poems. They're brilliant and priceless! Thanks again and take care.

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Sandra Feldman 12 November 2019

Good deeds and poetry Special formula, to be happier. Your very nice poem, if followed, helps too

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Shaun Cronick 14 November 2019

Thank you Sandra for your most very gracious comment. And I wish you all the best this life has to offer. Take care.

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