Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Relief Ne From My Predicament Comments

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Have you, ever felt orphaned as both your parents still alive? Ever felt hopeless as much hard you strive? Ever bare footed as someone wears your shoes? Ever teared for someone laughing at you?
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Oscar Shedah
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Tami Alshamsi 26 April 2011

nice poem, u expressed your feelings in interest way. and maybe life its fair but we see it unfair from our sad eyes

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Claire Riley 26 April 2011

This poem is relly good and relly speaks the truth about life :)

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Masaomi Tezuka 26 April 2011

Thtz a really sad poem and it speaks the truth bout life cuase life isnt fair. = }

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Oscar Shedah

Oscar Shedah

Tanga, Tanzania
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