Saturday, June 10, 2017

Relics Of My Parents' Marriage Comments

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A heavy metal stew pot
Which survived a war

The last of the dining room chairs
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Sheena Blackhall
clocks Grandmother marriage
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Jefferson Carter 10 June 2017

Sheena, I like this, especially the last stanza. Maybe re-work line 9? It seems unwieldy and obvious. If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Thanks! Yrs, JC

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