Relics Of Love Comments

Ah see! The sea is calm to-night, Silent sky covered with moonlight Sweet is this night-air, Everything seems to be tranquil and fair. You begin this love poem very poetically... like it very much..... love is a mystery. we love, we live and like you want to be remembered even after death....... very nice poem. Thank you dear poet. tony

Great poem. I really liked the lines- Years later, when my grave will be broken up, The heart of onlooker will shake up, For that'll be a passageway or a blurb Or a museum exhibiting relics of our love