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There! I fixed it.

I like the pun (or misspelling?) of 'vain' as 'vein'. It works in a depression poem. -chuck

Oh, the struggle of love and passion! How painful it can be, but don't dwell too long, as Lawrence said, 'it will fade'. Another really good poem Amanda. I am impressed. Regards, Seán

LOVE? It stains the heart for a time. However, do not use Clorox to try to remove leftover remnants. They fade away eventually and those lips will find a suitable match. Nice poem, Amanda. L